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Victoria Cardona's avatar

Chloe this is so lovely!!

Chloe 💗's avatar

Thank you so much, Victoria!

Dawn ~ The Happy Farmwife's avatar

Wow! Your writing pulled me right in. I was there feeling the sun on my face, the grass in my hands and the scent of fresh air! Beautiful writing Miss Chloe 🥰

Chloe 💗's avatar

Thank you!! ❤️

michael holt's avatar

Chloe, this reminds me of the opening scene in Bradbury's Dandelion Wine in which twelve year old Douglas is taken by his father to a special place in the woods, wrestles in the grass with his brother, and has an epiphany that he is truly alive.

Faith Is Believing's avatar

Beautifully written as I could feel the freedom of nature as I read. Your description of the dream was perfect! 🤩 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟

Chloe 💗's avatar

Thank you so much!

Ruth's Story Bytes's avatar

What a beautiful dream! Your descriptions pulled me in. I could see that squirrel 🐿️ and feel its annoyance. I could smell the pine and breathed in deeply. Thanks for sharing.

Chloe 💗's avatar

Ah, thank you so much! Thank you for reading! 🩷

Ruth's Story Bytes's avatar

You’re welcome, Chloe ❤️

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Chloe 💗's avatar

Thank you for reading!