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Dawn ~ The Happy Farmwife's avatar

Wow! Your writing pulled me right in. I was there feeling the sun on my face, the grass in my hands and the scent of fresh air! Beautiful writing Miss Chloe 🥰

michael holt's avatar

Chloe, this reminds me of the opening scene in Bradbury's Dandelion Wine in which twelve year old Douglas is taken by his father to a special place in the woods, wrestles in the grass with his brother, and has an epiphany that he is truly alive.

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